Oh dear Gerry... You did ask us to be merciless!!! Let me preface my critiscm by letting you know that I am sure my stuff suffers from the some of the same afflictions as yours. I will be posting tracks to MP3.com very soon (within the month) so you can get your own back then. Well where do I start? OK one word to sum up first "boring" To be more precise... The track lacks light and shade, in fact it lacks any definition at all. Every part of it is far too subtle, it sounds to me like you lack confidence in your ideas and can't bring yourself to explore your musical ideas strongly enough. I could go on but I don't want to appear to be relishing this. As an artist myself I can appreciate the obvious work you put into it. I hope I haven't been too harsh. Steve On 29/5/02 9:37 am, "Gerrit "Gerry" Straub" <gerrit.straub@...> wrote: > If you can find some time, please listen to > "Behind The Planets" and provide me with > your merciless criticism. > > www.mp3.com/Adream > > No need to slate the vocals, I know > they're bad, already taking singing > lessons right now, but wanted some > feedback in advance, couldn't wait... > > Thanks in advance > > Gerry > > > > > > > > > > Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/ > > Sent using the Entourage X Test Drive.